Story line/ storyboard (Oringinal idea)
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Harri and Matt are seating down talking (in Harri’s Office). or Harri entering the room and meeting Matt seating on his chair.
Flashback of Matt and Ayo in a fighting scene with Matt’s voice over the clip: either in a toilet, classroom or outside the buildings.
Harri runs away and matt pulls out his gun, screen blacks out and then we see Harri on the floor struggling and crawling away.
Matt points a gun at a camera (camera from Harri’s view), when the screen goes blank the gun shoot goes off.
While the screen is black , we hear the phone ring and Matt saying “ its done”
Title will appear from small print to big print on a black background.
- Come across two guards, within the office.
- Deal with both guards, and then wait for the main target to arrive. -- For this idea to work we would have to show the past 'flashbacks' which I will comment on later withing this blog.
- There will be a short conversation between the hitman and the target, with the target then being assassinated/executed.
'The 5th Column' - the name gives the audience a tingling feeling about what our film is about and it was has meaning behind it that is associated with the word assassin which our movie is based on.
"A fifth column is a group of people who undermine a larger group, such as a nation, from within, to the aid of an external enemy."
1- Vee punches Ayo.
2- Vee tackles Ayo into the desk, papers fly off the table.
3- Vee drags Ayo across the desk and papers fly off the edge of the table.
4- Ayo falls off the table and lands in a heap.
5 - You See Ayo on the floor with the sound of Vee Cocking the gun in the backgorund
With feedback from audience we decided to extend and improve on this shot as we would finally see in the other draft shots.
This is our second draft and our unfinished version of our 2 minute opening sequence. We have used a range of different software's on the Mac during the m
aking of the filming, some recommending ones and some new ones we just tried out and find on the Mac. This also includes the improvement from draft 1 which invovles gun affects, refilmed Harri and Matthew talking scene and extending the fighting scene by adding a new character in. We still have the credits and the Non dieigetic music to include to our final piece of work.
Evaluation
This is our uncompleted version of the 2 minute opening title sequence and we have added and changed some of the shots that we planned in our storyboard. the changes we made was mainly prolonging the fighting scene to make it more interesting. Also Harrighton added gunshot effects to make the gunshots during the film more realistic.
The part we struggled with is the lighting , even though at the time of filming the lighting didnt change but whilst watching the film lighting and focus of the camera changes. This could be due to the quality of camera or the different angle shots we took.
softwares used:
- Type live -We used this software to create the opening two credits : Jama production and AdotBREEZY LTD. This helped us by bringing our credits toa animation and the background of the credits
- Imovie - editing movies and adding effects
- Garage Band - creating our background music which will be non-diegetic for our final piece
this is photo's of our group, recording,filming and working during our coursework.
Final piece
Tuesday 9th February
This is our finished version with the credits, effects and background music , we have made a few changer during the three different versions such as , Harrighton's walk , extending the fight scene and adding a conversation between Matthew Venis and Guled Jama. the non-diegetic music we have used is the background music and the telephone. The diegetic sound is the gun shot effect that we have used a few times.
Location shots - oakgrove school classroom
The only improvements that I can think of are that we could have made the shooting more realistic but we don't have the resources for that. For example fake blood. also we could have picked a better location to shot our scene to make the 2 minute opening sequence more realistic as well.
the camera shots were really good and youy used a wide range of diffrent ones that worked well with the piece overall A+ guys :) "